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  <title>Comments on 'kiss'</title>
  <subtitle>When I went onto the field someone 
screamed into my ear,
 kicked my shin, 
jumped on my toe, 
after all that for some reason Derrik ended up right infront of me.
he looked onto my eyes and he was leaning in to kiss me ,
out of _nowhere_ some guy comes and hits Derrik.
He flew about 20 feet,
believe me i could measure it,
i rushed over to see if he was ok.
he was breathing faintly,
so i leaned in closer.
he kissed me,
then died right in my arms.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-01T19:27:09Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on kiss</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;look i said that he died because i don&amp;#8217;t believe in &amp;#8220;happily ever after&amp;#8221;....a &amp;#8220;happily ever after&amp;#8221; is a story that hasn&amp;#8217;t ended yet.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-01T19:27:09Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>The Master of Them that Know</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/drumzrok_aim_com</uri>
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    <title type="text">Comment on kiss</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Melis, how could he die. Well at least she got the kiss.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-24T23:45:01Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ramy</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on kiss</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Seriously? He died? That&amp;#8217;s like tragic!!!! I thought in fairy tales (that &lt;em&gt;was&lt;/em&gt; the assignment for school) it ends in &amp;#8220;Happily Ever After&amp;#8221; &lt;br /&gt; THE END !&lt;br /&gt;Not &amp;#8220;He died&amp;#8230;&amp;#8221; &lt;br /&gt;But it was pretty catchy, wait, can a story be catchy?&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-04T23:10:14Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>More Than Meets The Eyes</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/cappygrl95</uri>
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    <title type="text">Comment on kiss</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;this was sad but in an exciting way. I loved it!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/23312?basename=45568</id>
    <published>2008-03-04T22:28:08Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SocccerISmyLIFE</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on kiss</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Aww, sad, but it was sweet.&lt;br /&gt;A little editing needed but other than that very good.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/23312?basename=45566</id>
    <published>2008-03-04T22:12:47Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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