My dearest darling, sister sweet, I swear one day, one day we'll meet. I glance towards the clouds, these clouds of grey, and I swear to you lovely, forever I'll pray. It was too soon to say goodbye, I never expected you to die. My dearest darling, sister serene, I miss you so much, life's like a ravine. I keep falling down, you'd pick me back up, but now that you're gone, I miss you so much. You were my flight, but now I'm falling so fast, my wings of love ripped from my back. Oh lovely Lora, you meant so much, to everyone close enough to touch. And even then, you reached out farther, to help along some stranger's daughter. A foggy day, a ponderous truck, no one knew where you were, we miss you so much. My wondrous dear, dearest wonder, I swear one day, we'll dance in the thunder. Voices of rain, lighting brightens the sky, they all call your name, as i shriek 'baby don't die!' Although I've lost my wings, others still proudly wear them, they bear me up softly, so I fly once again. 2008-06-14T03:39:27Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/23414 <p>Beautiful. She&#8217;d be proud.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=70680 2008-06-14T03:39:27Z A Joker http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4337 <p>Lovely. ♥</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=62361 2008-05-14T23:35:06Z Luna http://ficlets.com/authors/luna <p>This is soo goregeous. I feel your pain through this poem but i want you to keep your chin up. luv ya</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=47447 2008-03-11T17:07:31Z Luuvvxiz_90 http://ficlets.com/authors/luuvvixiz_90 <p>This is moving&#8230; simply gorgeous. It says so much.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45920 2008-03-06T17:58:56Z Music-Hearted http://ficlets.com/authors/musicxhearted <p>Oh, and you made me tear up a little with this. (Something, I rarely do&#8230;)</p> <p>My Mom- Honey this is truly beautiful. How I wish I could bear your pain and help you cope.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45766 2008-03-05T22:18:18Z Brebelles http://ficlets.com/authors/brebelles <p>This is beautiful. Gorgeous. Lorie WOULD be proud. She was proud of you, I know this to be true, in my heart of hearts. I&#8217;m proud of you, for so many things.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45763 2008-03-05T22:15:27Z Brebelles http://ficlets.com/authors/brebelles <p>Wow. No more words. Just wow.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45755 2008-03-05T21:47:28Z Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus) http://ficlets.com/authors/capital_w_writer <p>Wow. A powerful piece, full of emotion. She would be proud.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45734 2008-03-05T20:57:09Z Adam Croft http://ficlets.com/authors/adamcroft <p>That is so sad! I am very sorry for your loss! She is looking proudly down at you!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/23414?basename=45733 2008-03-05T20:55:03Z Blusparrow http://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrow