Comments on 'A detained meal'As they crept closer to the pasture land, Sao began whipping her emerald green tail agitatedly from side to side. "Sao? what is it?" the boy drew in front of his dragon while quickly taking out a small jade dagger - the color of his dragon.
The birds' sweet songs swiftly shifted to that of warning calls and the trees seemed to grow around them. The boy tensed as he heard the bleating of sheep farther along the heavily wooded path. Sao snorted, steam escaping her flared nostrils, as the boy carefully knelt to examen the surrounding area.
The birds' calls grew distant, until there was only the menacing 'swish swish!' of Sao's glistening tail. Her muscular neck rippled as she silently turned to the bristling boy. "Yes" he said, understanding her, "it definitely feels like him".2008-03-11T17:08:56Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/23520Comment on A detained meal<p>oooooooooo<br />i cant wait to hear more.<br />i am so far on the edge of my seat that i think i see a stain on the carpet!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23520?basename=474482008-03-11T17:08:56ZLuuvvxiz_90http://ficlets.com/authors/luuvvixiz_90Comment on A detained meal<p>Him? Ooohhh, thats good!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23520?basename=461642008-03-07T13:30:24Zflute faeriehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061Comment on A detained meal<p>I guess, eventually, I’ll have to read the other stories. It sound very interesting.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23520?basename=460812008-03-07T01:39:05ZBrebelleshttp://ficlets.com/authors/brebellesComment on A detained meal<p>Ooh, very intense and mysterious. Quite a little story point you’ve created here.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23520?basename=459932008-03-06T22:00:11ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477