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  <title>Comments on 'Ocean Crisis'</title>
  <subtitle>I was jogging along the beach. I saw children laughing and splashing each other playfully in the water. It was such a peaceful sight. Some girl scouts were selling leis to raise money for some charity. 

I felt the wind in my hair and felt free. The sky started turning colors and the wind picked up. Though I thought nothing of it. _It's probably just going to drizzle a bit_ I thought. But was I wrong.

The trees started swaying violently, the flowers were losing they're petals, and the waves were rousing violently. The children were still in the water, _oh god, _, I thought. So I yelled at them to get out of the water. They couldn't here me. A huge wave was about to topple over them. So I ran into the ocean and tried to save them. When the wave passed and I surfaced, I saw them. Oh thank God, none of them were hurt. I went over to them and asked if they were all safe. The little boy said no, he asked if I knew where his sister was. She was no where to be found.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-26T00:48:00Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Ocean Crisis</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very frightening images.  Simple and direct storytelling, I think, for better or worse.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-26T00:48:00Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Ocean Crisis</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Oh gosh! What happened to her??&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-09T16:33:18Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>.:band baby:.</name>
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