Comments on '"Do I Know You?"'I successfully managed to duck the boss the entire morning.
I had plans to meet my fiancee, Jolinda, at the sub shop down the block.
She had gotten there ahead of me and ordered lunch for both of us, she knew I always ordered the same thing. Turkey with mayo, no lettuce or onions. So predictable am I.
We were laughing, having a pleasant lunch and all. But I was feeling uneasy, discontent and blurted out, "I think we should break up."
"Get outta of here, Parker!", she laughed, thinking I was joking.
So I laughed and pretended it was just a lame joke.
She kissed me and went back to her job at her law firm.
I was still sitting, finishing my turkey sub, when a brown haired guy in white shirt and tie, who looked vaguely familiar, walked up to my table and said, "ParkerOwN257"
I thought he was hitting on me or something creepy, I was bewildered as to how this guy knew my screen name.
"Do I know you, how do you know my screen name?," I questioned.2008-03-10T19:04:12Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/23895Comment on "Do I Know You?"<p>sequelled!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=471272008-03-10T19:04:12ZNever Explainhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4153Comment on "Do I Know You?"<p>Love the name Jolinda – the characters’ interaction / dialogue flow naturally. Keep it going. Nicely done, Kermitgorf!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=469412008-03-09T22:21:20ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrackComment on "Do I Know You?"<p>Definitely can feel how off balance and off center the character feels.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=468602008-03-09T19:25:01ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on "Do I Know You?"<p>this is awesome goood.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=468132008-03-09T17:17:47ZBernerOberlandhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mercutio1027Comment on "Do I Know You?"<p>Oh, so it is two different people’s lives! I got it! cool! SEQUELLLL !! DO IT !.... ahem, I mean sequel please.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=468032008-03-09T16:41:53ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on "Do I Know You?"<p>weird… can’t wait for the sequel!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=467922008-03-09T16:18:50Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on "Do I Know You?"<p>ehh keep going!! i need to know what happens!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=467882008-03-09T16:12:16ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on "Do I Know You?"<p>Nice.</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23895?basename=467812008-03-09T15:42:04ZNever Explainhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4153