Comments on 'Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]'The cute guy at the table near the Steak 'n Shake looked over for a third time. Had Emily not become accustomed to even public humiliation, she might have allowed herself to be hopeful. Instead, memories of abuse at the orphanage resurfaced and raised her blood pressure. The empty chair across from her moved backward several inches.
_He likes you_, said a voice.
Emily sighed out loud. Talking to them in private was one thing, but public places always made it difficult. And God forbid you not answer them.
"How do you know?" Emily muttered, covering her mouth.
_Former wife._
The whole not using compete sentences thing had always bugged Emily, but not nearly as much as now being pimped to a stranger by the ghost of his dead wife.
"Isn't this a little odd?" she hissed. "How long have you been gone?"
_Three weeks. Must avenge._
Emily put it together. "Another seduce-and-torture job. Freakin' awesome."
She was annoyed beyond measure. On the table, an unopened ketchup pack imploded.2008-03-19T02:37:16Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/23989Comment on Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]<p>haha i love this. great job.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23989?basename=498092008-03-19T02:37:16ZFreedomhttp://ficlets.com/authors/http_ficlets_com_authors_withinthewords_comComment on Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]<p>i love how the ghosts don’t use complete sentences. :)<br />great job.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23989?basename=489332008-03-16T18:22:04Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]<p>freaky just freaky and awesome.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23989?basename=471092008-03-10T18:29:19ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]<p>Ooh, and it has ‘awesome’ in the title. What a great glimpse into the life of the character, complete with hints at past events and a novel version of how ghosts might talk/act/etc. Great entry to the challenge!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/23989?basename=470962008-03-10T17:31:46ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477