Comments on 'PWN3D'"Why?" Kamaria asked. "What's wrong with being a Halfing?"
Melanie looked hesitant. "Well..." she started, but was interrupted by the door creaking open.
"Hope I'm not interrupting anything," Aedin said as he popped his head in. He gave Melanie a wink, and she smiled gratefully. Apparently she didn't want to tell Kamaria any more. "Oh, Kamaria, I think you should come with me now," he said, gesturing for her to follow him.
"Why did you interrupt her?! She was just about to tell me..."
"You must learn to keep quiet!" Aedin said, crushing his strong hand against her perfect lips. "Please," he hissed, "just follow me. And _stay silent._"
_Why does he always have to..._
"I repeat. SILENT."
Kamaria followed Aedin down a long, dimly lit hallway similar to the one she was in before. This time, however, the flames of the torches were _green._
They came to a large, wooden door covered with writhing golden serpents around crimson hearts. "If you'll follow me," he said as he disappeared behind the door.2008-03-11T00:35:05Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/24047Comment on PWN3D<p>Great job playing well with Disturbed. Great action and suspense in this one. The repeating the command to be quiet after even the internal thought was a funny touch too.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24047?basename=472802008-03-11T00:35:05ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on PWN3D<p>Great job playing well with Disturbed. Great action and suspense in this one. The repeating the command to be quiet after even the internal thought was a funny touch too.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24047?basename=472772008-03-11T00:33:26ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on PWN3D<p>thx for leaving me the hard one!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24047?basename=472012008-03-10T22:37:27ZDisturbed Youthhttp://ficlets.com/authors/gothicaComment on PWN3D<p> GASP !</p>
<p>Oh no!</p>
<p>What’s wrong with being a halfling?</p>
<p>I wanna know too!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24047?basename=471962008-03-10T22:24:57ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreos