Comments on 'Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge'John kicked the body with his cowboy boot, "*Another one bites the dust.*" He spit a chaw that sizzled in the hot Arizona sand.
Chet looked at him and stare back down at the mutilated body splayed before them, "*That's what I like about you,* John." He squatted beside the corpse. Rummaging in the pockets and pulling out the folding money and bag of gold coins.
Chet stood and walked over to John, handing him the folding money while he shoved the coins deep in his own pocket, muttering,"Got *brass in pocket. _I'm special._*"
John grabbed Chet and whirled him around. The noon heat fanning the flames of tempers rising. Though John smiled when he said, "Now Chet, *Don't do me like that. Do you really want to hurt me?*"
Chet shrugged out of John's grip and laughed. He climbed onto his horse and whistled sharply. John stood looking at him befuddled, "*Is there something I should know?*"
Chet called out, "Over here, *Major Tom,* the mass murderer John Black. You'll find the folded money on his person."2008-03-14T14:24:55Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/24263Comment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>I stole your character for a sequel to mine! Heehee, story #24509</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=483912008-03-14T14:24:55ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>That was a great story and great use of songs.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=481982008-03-13T20:59:18ZChrisWDPhttp://ficlets.com/authors/chriswdpComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>Anything that starts with Queen has to be good. And this was! Brutal but brilliant twist at the end, framing a guy and pocketing some profit in the process. Too slick.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=481312008-03-13T16:29:10ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>Yay, The Clash!!! Some great songs used here, too.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=480462008-03-13T02:23:46ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>very nice, i liked this one =) ((not that i know the songs.. but still!))<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=480412008-03-13T02:12:31Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>If I keep reading these I’m going to have to make a mix CD with all the awesome tunes. Great, gritty western Jenunique! I loved it.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=479012008-03-12T23:29:59ZMeliahttp://ficlets.com/authors/meliaComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>I like it, a western infused with a li’l bit of the 80s.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=478592008-03-12T21:20:47Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>I actually have a t-shirt that states “Product of the 80’s” I wear it proudly… <em>every</em> chance I get. ;)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=478052008-03-12T17:35:20ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>Cool western and you just couldn/t stick to 4 could ya lol.. you must love the 80’s music. Glad to see your back.. haven’t seen any of you or your mom & son’s writings in a bit.<br />keep up the alwaying interesting work, in diffent genre’s I like your story telling style.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=477992008-03-12T16:45:06ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Should I Stay or Should I Go... Capital W's Retro Music Challenge<p>Okay I couldn’t stand it. I had to do it now. And I may do another…. ;) And uh… I kinda put more than 4 in. :/</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24263?basename=477682008-03-12T13:52:58ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenunique