Comments on '"Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}'"*Hello*", I said, "*Private Eyes*, what can I do ya for?"
"*All I need is a miracle*", said a distressed female voice on the other end of the line.
"Nothing like putting me *under pressure*," I said.
"You don't understand, I *hurt so bad*, I think my husband is cheating on me with high priced call girls," she sniffled.
"Is he a politician?," I asked sarcasticaly.
"I thougth he was a *goody two shoes* when we met. I loved him *heart and soul* for twenty years. My family hated him, we had no money in the beginning, but *against all odds*, we made it work. Sometimes just *living on a prayer*," the woman said, clearly devastated at this turn of events.
I'll look into it Ma'am," I said and took down her info.
"*Call me* when you catch the slime ball in the act.
I promised that I would. I hated cases like this. Cheaters. Think they are *smooth operator*s. But *if this is it*, the only case I got, then so be it. I'd go at it with gusto.
First I'd pour myself a whiskey and feel *wonderful tonight*.2008-03-16T04:45:34Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/24329Comment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Great story but my favorite part is the question “Is he a politician?” That one really made me laugh!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=488462008-03-16T04:45:34Zjudee4u2http://ficlets.com/authors/judee4u2Comment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Aha! I am not the only one who can’t follow rules around here! ;) Perfect! I love it! The more the merrier!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=480922008-03-13T11:58:17ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>very nice. they fit well. =) even if I don’t know the songs. hehe.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=480372008-03-13T02:07:04Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Seamless integration of the songs. Nice choices, as well. Private Eyes, Against All Odds/Living on a Prayer.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479882008-03-13T01:24:06Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Friggin’ over achiever. The challenge clearly said 4 songs. I don’t think I should be penalized for following the rules. Seriously, fun stuff, great job fitting it into the pulp fiction detective novel genre. It all worked really well.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479682008-03-13T01:12:28ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>I love how seamlessly the song titles fit into your narrative. Great job.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479492008-03-13T00:52:39ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>I like it a lot! wow! that was way better than what I entered! 6, yes 6, stars!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479482008-03-13T00:48:38ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>That was great!</p>
<p>The song titles fit in perfectly.</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479472008-03-13T00:48:31ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>good choices, i like how you got them to neatly fit into the story. And it’s not cheezy like some. It flows natrually.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479422008-03-13T00:38:37ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Great. Now I have Hall & Oates going through my head (not that that’s a bad thing…). :D</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479412008-03-13T00:37:13ZCapital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)http://ficlets.com/authors/capital_w_writerComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Yeah, but great choices for songs! :D Very amusing.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479402008-03-13T00:35:40ZCapital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)http://ficlets.com/authors/capital_w_writerComment on "Hello, Private Eyes"{80's Retro Music Challenge}<p>Uh oh.. unlucky 13 songs…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24329?basename=479342008-03-13T00:30:07ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf