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  <title>Comments on 'Please, Eve'</title>
  <subtitle>Please, Eve come and tempt me
In the garden of my mind.
I&#8217;m alive for you.
Obsession dripping,
Pumping through my veins,
I&#8217;m a lie for you.

Red apple lust,
Passion, pleasure bending,
Heart and soul,
I&#8217;m alive for you.
Forbidden treasure,
Enticing eyes,
Break my heart again.
I&#8217;m a lie for you.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-07-02T18:27:10Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;How did I miss this?! It&amp;#8217;s gorgeous. Sinful, even.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-07-02T18:27:10Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ana Cristina</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt; I LOVE IT SO ,GREAT  JOB .&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24414?basename=59388</id>
    <published>2008-04-28T22:14:51Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Yeah this is really sensual. I love it&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-14T18:22:59Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>KasumiRose</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;m really impressed.  Great poetry!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-14T01:26:28Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Music-Hearted</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;yes indeed. this is teriffic! &lt;br /&gt;great how this was writen from the devils perspective&amp;#8230;&lt;br /&gt;i love your poetry as well. :]-&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-13T18:22:36Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>heartbeats echocho</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wow! That was just fabulous. I really enjoyed that one. I love your poetry. Keep it up!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-13T18:10:43Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Please, Eve</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Great monotone of the devil inticing eve.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-13T18:02:00Z</published>
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      <name>butterflygirl6106</name>
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