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  <title>Comments on 'broken teen'</title>
  <subtitle>A bad mood puts my in my place,
and i have to sit here while in u hit me in the face.
I am a broken dream,
nutin is what it seems.
You walking in and out the door,
i ask where r u going and u hit me more.
I want to call the police but i don't have the guts.
Plezz i had enough.
I won't say anything else.
I'll let u be by yourself.
You can have the bed you can have the bath,
you can have the food,but something else that won't last.
The love i have given you,
becasue for a sec i thought it was true.
When you spoke the words and what u said,
but know ur messing with my head.
I will sleep in the box outside,
my shameful face i shall hide.
For it's love that tore me apart,
for it's me that's ur worthless piece of art.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-14T12:58:48Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on broken teen</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;This is great Scarlet! Love it&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24676?basename=56251</id>
    <published>2008-04-14T12:58:48Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Question Queen of the 21st centuary.</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on broken teen</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;This is great Scarlet! Love it&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24676?basename=56252</id>
    <published>2008-04-14T12:58:48Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Question Queen of the 21st centuary.</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on broken teen</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That is amazing. I can feel how sad she is.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24676?basename=49277</id>
    <published>2008-03-17T20:19:42Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Lone Writer</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on broken teen</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very promising. &amp;#8220;I am a broken dream.&amp;#8221; That&amp;#8217;s a great phrase. It says so much.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24676?basename=48980</id>
    <published>2008-03-16T20:48:29Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>thebetweenspace</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on broken teen</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Aaw, this is so sad.&lt;br /&gt;Youre talented. Very.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-15T22:49:00Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>xxcatiexcatxx</name>
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