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  <title>Comments on 'don't play it like it's ur sister'</title>
  <subtitle>My story has no ending,
it has no middle and has no begining.
A sad love story that torn me apart,
one that has no start.
We started out as friends,
friends till the end.
Then we became close,
it didn't become gross.
We started kissing,
and when we're gone we'll be missing.
Then we started making out,
how many times i cannot count.
The last time i went to ur house,
she was found out.
The other girl with u in ur bed.
r u trying to mess with me head.
why r u doing this what did i do,
waz it me or waz it up.
Now i run away crying,
and u try to stop me but i say stop ur lying.
then i find out it's ur sister,
why waz she sitting on ur bed and u were just saying cause i missed her.
It's now what u think she was out and about,
but i herd u to making out.
a kissing noise,
u r just anthor boy.
I wanted uto prove they r not all the same,
we'll u lost this game</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-17T19:52:03Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on don't play it like it's ur sister</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I really like this, but there are some spelling mistakes and its a bit confusing in the middle. Good job, though.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24680?basename=49248</id>
    <published>2008-03-17T19:52:03Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Lone Writer</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/solopen</uri>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on don't play it like it's ur sister</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://ficlets.com/stories/24680"/>
    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;This is one of my personal favorites&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/24680?basename=48880</id>
    <published>2008-03-16T13:37:04Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>sfost93</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/so_long_and_goodnight</uri>
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