Comments on 'WARLORDS'The castle walls of the _Blue_ fortress towered above the red soil, offering protection from the three other kingdoms on Mars. Crown Me Tarzan, Warlord of Mars, looked down from the space terrace. He raised his arm, lowered it quickly, and his henchmen launched a fireball from the mouth of a shielded platform.
The fireball was hurled at the _Green_ fortress with a terrific explosion. It slammed into the castle walls with a force of over 300 kilotons. Queen Reiden, Warlord of the _Green Kingdom_, screamed through the hole in the castle walls that used to be her throne room. She stepped in front of the video portal to hail the Martian Warlord. "Curse you, Tarzan, King of Mars," Queen Reidun cried in anger. "Your brazen attack will be met with swift retaliation." The screen went blank.
She launched a fireball at the _Blue Fortress,_ but it was deflected by Tarzan (King of Mars') henchmen immediately, hurling back into the Queen's throne room and obliterating the _Green Fortress_ into tiny bits of space dust.2008-03-16T03:32:21Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/24715Comment on WARLORDS<p>Great job! And I definitely agree, CMT , KOM will definitely appreciate it (especially since you were nice enough to have him win!). LOL .<br />If you can ever think of a way to work me into a ficlet, I would be duly honoured. :D</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24715?basename=488332008-03-16T03:32:21ZCapital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)http://ficlets.com/authors/capital_w_writerComment on WARLORDS<p>Kinda like Star Trek meets Planet of the Apes. What’s up with the Tarzan Warlord on Mars?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24715?basename=488322008-03-16T03:31:14ZMaddawghttp://ficlets.com/authors/maddawgComment on WARLORDS<p>Yeah, Stovohobo – he made the comment that I beat him to the ROBOTRON story he was working on… Felt bad so I wrote him into this one. Hope he likes it. BTW – I’m gonna write you into a future ficlet. Hope you don’t mind! :P – Yoda</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24715?basename=488282008-03-16T03:15:19ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrackComment on WARLORDS<p>Very nice reference to CMT ,KOM. I’m sure he’ll appreciate it. =)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24715?basename=488232008-03-16T03:07:50ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohobo