Comments on 'Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]'Her face was contorted in a confused scowl, and her silver eyes squinted as she peered at the ancient scroll. _This simply doesn't make sense,_ she thought. Lailah looked up at the tree, then back down at the page. "Hmm," she grunted. "Hey, Deszi, can you come look at this?" she called.
Deszi got out of her blanket by the fire and sulked over to where Lailah was standing. "What," she said. Not a question, a simple, unhappy statement.
"This tree is wrong. It should look like this," Lailah gestured to the page, "but it looks like that," she pointed at the tree.
"Let me see." Deszi snatched the parchment from Lailah's long, thin hands. She also could not tell what was up with the tree. "Ugh, I hate doing this," she mumbled. Deszi pinned the page to the tree and pressed her hands against it, saying something that sounded like incantations.
Lailah stared at Deszi, puzzled. _What the heck is she doing?_ she thought.
"It's _that_ tree," Deszi said, handing the page back to Lailah. "Dig there."2008-03-29T01:44:58Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/24754Comment on Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]<p>yes, i am too a treehugger. :D</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24754?basename=524052008-03-29T01:44:58Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]<p>This was cool. I don’t know what you’re talking about, I liked yours better! Much better developed I think. I also like the tree. Love trees with a passion, I do.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24754?basename=508872008-03-22T23:59:46ZStorykeeper of Faehttp://ficlets.com/authors/smileComment on Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]<p>i wish I had psychic abilities!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24754?basename=492652008-03-17T19:57:34ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]<p>thanks for commenting, THX . :)<br />made my day.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24754?basename=490042008-03-16T22:51:31Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]<p>A nice example of that style of ficlets that casually goes about a snippet of a story as if oblivious to the character limit. Does that make sense? I mean you wrote it as if we had the 50 pages before these paragraphs and the 100 pages afterward, which makes for a kind of cool feel to it all.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/24754?basename=489742008-03-16T20:31:33ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477