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  <title>Comments on 'Helena: TheNightClub'</title>
  <subtitle>The place was filthy and held the next worldwide sweeping plague on its doorstep. I loved it upon first sight. My little black dress inched up my thinly muscled thighs and all five of my dancing partners kept glancing at it with mile high lust.

I shook my dark curly hair; the tight corkscrews glimmered and swept across my slim shoulders gently. Waggling my tempting hips, I increasingly enjoyed seeing hearts shatter, male and female, gay and straight, monster and mortal, across the dance floor.

After licking my lips I checked the man next to me, hankypankying quite well for a mortal. I drew him closer, first with my coal black eyes and then with my equally painted dark lips.

Fire ignited and surprise shook my knees when he kissed me. I smoldered and melted beneath him, his fingers traced the hem of my dress and I felt ice trickle down my spine.

And then he bit down gently, teasingly, on my bottom lip, and I _knew_ I was gonna have some damn fun tonight.

The music played on.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-18T00:48:49Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Helena: TheNightClub</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;haha NE. Nice job RwS. =) very nice describtions of everything.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-18T00:48:49Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>.:band baby:.</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Helena: TheNightClub</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;uh&amp;#8230;....(blushes)&lt;br /&gt;:]&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-16T23:50:12Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Never Explain</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Helena: TheNightClub</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ooh, that was&amp;#8230;smoldering.  I feel a little guilty just reading it.  Very nice job hinting at the other-worldly aspects of the setting.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-16T21:13:48Z</published>
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      <name>THX 0477</name>
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