look into my eyes you see a heart, one that is falling apart. Look into my eyes you see a flame, and how it stays the same. Look into my eyes you see the world coming to an end, there's no one to fight and defend You seen the heart, let it not fall apart. You seen the flame, make it not stay the same. You see the world coming to an end, be someone i can fight for and defend 2008-04-14T12:57:14Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/24774 <p>I love this, this is really amazing!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24774?basename=56250 2008-04-14T12:57:14Z Question Queen of the 21st centuary. http://ficlets.com/authors/aqua_baby <p>cuteness. i like this one, definately in my top of yours.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24774?basename=49368 2008-03-18T00:33:04Z Jayme Meiram http://ficlets.com/authors/roodles <p>I really like this one. It may be my favorite so far. Only place you might want to change is &#8220;you seen the heart&#8221; and &#8220;you seen the flame&#8221;... I might have put &#8220;You&#8217;ve seen&#8221; in those places, but that&#8217;s the poet&#8217;s decision. I like your poetry. Keep writing!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24774?basename=48978 2008-03-16T20:46:03Z thebetweenspace http://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace