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  <title>Comments on 'Epilogue (A New Life)'</title>
  <subtitle>GAME OVER

STANDINGS :

YodaOnCrack (Joshua): 5,000,000 
Capital &#8220;W&#8221; Writer (Amanda): 2,850,000
TheBetweenSpace (Nathaniel): 925,000
THX 0477 (Paulo): 750,000
Stovohobo (Vincent): 700,000

&#8220;Oh, my god. That was the best video game I&#8217;ve ever played,&#8221; said Stovohobo. &#8220;They&#8217;re getting so realistic! There were times I couldn&#8217;t tell if I was making decisions or the A.I. was. I still can&#8217;t believe you capped me, &#8216;Tween. I miscalculated, clearly.&#8221;

&#8220;You shouldn&#8217;t have told me your plan. I can&#8217;t believe you did that. It made my decision easy. I had to try to get in with THX to get to Yoda.&#8221;

&#8220;I thought we had a plan, &#8216;W&#8217;.&#8221; THX moaned. &#8220;Why&#8217;d you stab me in the back?&#8221;

&#8220;I would&#8217;ve been with you &#8216;til the end, but gods, when I visited Yoda, his plan seemed perfect. BTW , Yoda, I never saw that coming.&#8221;

&#8220;Once you delivered me my prey,&#8221; said Joshua, &#8221; I had to take you out. Or I wouldn't have been able to achieve my goal.&amp;quot;

_Funny_, thought Joshua, _they have no idea what happened. They still think I&#8217;m YodaOnCrack_.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-21T17:06:45Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Epilogue (A New Life)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was awesome!! &lt;br /&gt;I&amp;#8217;m 2 months late.. but i&amp;#8217;m glad i took the time to go back and read the story &amp;#8211; it was awesome..&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;5 stars&lt;/strong&gt; ..&lt;br /&gt;Good work  TBS !&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-21T17:06:45Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>ALRO613 &#9834; LoA &#9835;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Epilogue (A New Life)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Yeah, when I realized (half way through?) that I was writing the plot of an immersive futuristic video game, I kind of got twist happy. Thanks for the comments.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T20:39:26Z</published>
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      <name>thebetweenspace</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Epilogue (A New Life)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Haha, a nice twisty end to a twisty story. Thanks, that was fun to read&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T20:37:12Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ridcully Calvert</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Epilogue (A New Life)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I figured you&amp;#8217;d have a good sense of humor about it. That&amp;#8217;s just how my muse arranged it. I tried to change it to a female ficleteer, but it just didn&amp;#8217;t work.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-18T00:52:29Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Epilogue (A New Life)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt; LOL . I love it!&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#8220;A New Life&amp;#8221; is right. I&amp;#8217;m female?!&lt;br /&gt;Then, again, I do have a tendency to play female characters in video games. I don&amp;#8217;t know why, but I tend to be more successful with them.&lt;br /&gt;Great job!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-18T00:45:47Z</published>
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      <name>Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)</name>
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