Comments on 'Walking Down the Hall'

Comments on 'Walking Down the Hall' Behind the door was a long hallway. Kamaria quickly walked through and caught up with Aedin. "Why won't anyone explain to me what's going on? Why couldn't Melanie tell me what's wrong with being a Halfing?" "Because that's wasn't her job to do. Her job was to wait until you woke up." "So does she know what's going on?" "Well, not everything. She's kind of like my accomplice so she knows a bit, but not everything." "Well, are _you_ going to explain anytime soon?" "I suppose." They walked in silence for a few moments down the dark hall. Finally Kamaria spoke again. "I thought you could read minds?" "Oh, sorry. Most vampires can, but it's limited for some. It's complicated. I'm not currently reading your thoughts, so ask your questions out loud." "Why can't _I_ read minds?" "Well, you're only half vampire. I not exactly sure of the extent of your abilities as a Halfing." They reached the end of the hall. Aedin opened the door. 2008-03-19T00:25:21Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/24942 Comment on Walking Down the Hall <p>Nice job with the suspense in the midst of letting out little tidbits of information.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24942?basename=49740 2008-03-19T00:25:21Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 Comment on Walking Down the Hall <p>its a Halfing silly, not a Halfling! other than you did exactly as i wanted you too! yeah! :)</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24942?basename=49469 2008-03-18T02:05:18Z Disturbed Youth http://ficlets.com/authors/gothica Comment on Walking Down the Hall <p>Cool story</p> <p>=D</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/24942?basename=49361 2008-03-18T00:27:43Z ACORN http://ficlets.com/authors/acorn360