Comments on 'Stay for a While [Music Challenge]'"_We were walking, just the other day..._" slid on its slippery way through the dry air of the apartment, robbed of moisture by the heater.
"How...many times...does that make?" I manage to ask between fervent kisses.
"Five, six. Shut up and kiss me," she says back, smiling devilishly through each and every kiss. I never thought I'd see this side of her when we met in class, but darned if I was going to pass on it.
"_I watched as sweat ran down your face, reached up and I caught it at your chin..._"
"I should...shut it off."
"Do you want to get up and...turn it off?" That was by far the most wicked thing I had ever heard this woman say. There was really only one answer.
"_Doing nothing for the fun, a little taste of the good life..._"
"Your...roommates?" I ask.
"Due any minute...like you care." This was serious. Was I falling for this woman? What's happening? What should I be doing?
"_Makes us want to stay, stay, stay for awhile..._"
Guess I'll just stay...for a while.2008-03-21T16:56:17Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/25076Comment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>I also agree with all the above comments, there isn’t much else to say other then that.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=504752008-03-21T16:56:17ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>Somehow I missed this one. Excellent. I hope you don’t get killed, but I can see how you might. ;) I promise to invoke my Fifth Amendment rights! :D</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=504522008-03-21T15:51:56ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>Whoa, I agree with all the above comments. I adore the fact that it’s true.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=504422008-03-21T14:55:43Zflute faeriehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061Comment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>Hehe very nice. I agree, that fact that it’s a true story makes it so much better.<br />LöA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=502382008-03-20T17:50:53ZSaint Chuckhttp://ficlets.com/authors/chuck_theloveComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>Great ficlet, I loved the way you worked the lyrics into the story; it made perfect sense. Now I gotta go listen to this song :-)<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497142008-03-18T23:23:21Zpaper flowershttp://ficlets.com/authors/paper_flowersComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>I’ll say ditto on the way you framed the lyrics, and knowing it’s a true story makes it that much better!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497082008-03-18T23:03:14Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>Great job THX ! You told a story incorperating the lyrics and you told us about your meaning of the song. <br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497062008-03-18T23:01:00ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>sweet story of love.. ina song<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497052008-03-18T22:46:12ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>I’m going to have to hunt up this song, because I’m not remembering it right now. A very sweet story. I love how you intersperse the lyrics throughout the text.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497032008-03-18T22:36:53ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Stay for a While [Music Challenge]<p>I am so going to get killed for writing this, but, yeah, true story.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25076?basename=497002008-03-18T22:31:52ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477