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  <title>Comments on 'take my heart'</title>
  <subtitle>As i sit alone in my room on my bed,
so many things are going through my head.
I keep thinking about all the words you said,
words i can't forget.
You told to me to move on,
but i ended up being alone.
the last time you kissed my lips,
you sent me into bliss.
But yet you don't know how i feel,
these open wouds won't heal.
I would do anything to win your heart back,
but i am afraid it's to late for that.
I wanted your love,
but you wouldn't give it up.
You didn't want to have to heal what was once broken,
it's ok i will just keep looking.
Look for me if you wnat my heart,
cause i want to be that piece of art.
Hanging in your hallway,
i will be yours anyday.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-20T00:27:34Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on take my heart</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Terrific! Good work. Not only can I identify with the poem, but I love the way it flows.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T00:27:34Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>thebetweenspace</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on take my heart</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Great I love this.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-19T22:47:05Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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