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  <title>Comments on 'Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)'</title>
  <subtitle>Although it looked ordinary at first, something definately wasn&#8217;t right. The boy turned his head to the side and straightened his hazel brown hair until it lay flat around his ears. He glanced down again, trying to hide the fact that he was staring wide-eyed at this random, beautiful girl standing before him. He opened his mouth to speak words, but nothing appeared but the smoke curling out from the cold air of the park.

She was definately not ordinary, more like extraordinary. She smiled and giggled, tucking her blonde curls deeper into her hood. Her face altered to a shade of red and she finally got courage.

&amp;quot;Hey.&amp;quot; she whispered seductively. Yep, far from ordinary. The hazel-haired boy gaped in wonder at the actual words that came from her perfect-shaped mouth. If only, he could speak too, then they could get together and create something called a conversation. 

_Speak_ his mind told him but his brain failed to connect two and two as he tried again to converse with this angel. </subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-12T20:14:39Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;awww this is way too cute..and i wish guys would build up the courage to actually say something back.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/25236?basename=55841</id>
    <published>2008-04-12T20:14:39Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>howhardlifeis&#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;this is a very cute story. i think there is a great sequel coming up, or at least its set up for one. but nevertheless, amazing ficlet, i cant wait to read more.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/25236?basename=51092</id>
    <published>2008-03-24T01:20:13Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Kinetic Kenzie&#8482;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;aww this is soo cutee =D&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/25236?basename=50802</id>
    <published>2008-03-22T18:54:10Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>LovingYourHeartbreak&#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;aww I am sorry Kermitgorf, I didn&amp;#8217;t think we were that intimidating. This is really cute!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/25236?basename=50429</id>
    <published>2008-03-21T14:36:49Z</published>
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      <name>Blusparrow</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;i remember doing that.. often.. girls are so intimidating&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/25236?basename=50144</id>
    <published>2008-03-20T05:37:52Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SKermitgorf</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Great story.  This is a good setup for a sequel!&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;=D&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T03:47:28Z</published>
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      <name>ACORN</name>
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