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  <title>Comments on 'On The Run'</title>
  <subtitle>It all started upside down.

I must have been pretty dizzy or else maybe it would not have started upside down... or maybe it would have. Either way, this is when my crazy adventure started.

I was out with friends hanging around the stoops in the city. One of them had some smack, so we decided to take it. Why not, right? I think i took a smidge too much 'cause next thing you know, the whole world was upside down. I couldn't walk or even stand up. My friends were looking at me like I had three heads.

&amp;quot;Are yah aiight? Yah looks a little pale there Teddy.&amp;quot; That's my nickname, Teddy. Next thing you know, I black out and then I'm sitting in a lawn chair back in the alleyway. 

&amp;quot;Wake up Tedz! We're gonna getz caught! Wake the hell up!&amp;quot; 

I says, &amp;quot;Are yous guys serious? Where'z the coppers? We better run.&amp;quot; After that, I was still upside down, running into a bus station.

I put on sunglasses so them poes don't see my eyes. Once on the bus, I'm half delusional. &amp;quot;Are dey still runnin'?&amp;quot;</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-20T15:59:48Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on On The Run</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;if some one else would like to sequel this, be my guest.  i am on a thought block now, i can&amp;#8217;t think of how this will turn out&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T15:59:48Z</published>
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      <name>p.laur&#233;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on On The Run</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;m curious to see how this will end&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-20T15:57:57Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>OrangeOreos</name>
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