“Its hailing once again, this is the ninth day it has bin hailing.” “Son will you please sit down and let god worry about the weather.” “Don’t give me that crap about mystical belief crap.” “Well son god does work in mysteries ways.” “My fucking ass he does. He is like everyone else he makes a mistake and he runs and hides with the rest of us. There isn’t much mystery to that if you ask me.” “He makes a path for an eighteen year old girl to watch for a blinking red light in a chemical plant and then doses off when the light starts to blink and now look where it has landed us.” “Things seem bleak now but mankind knows how to rebuild.” “Yeah I guess your right but there’s no stopping us from destroying it again.” “Best not to think of the negatives in today’s life.” “Oh am not thinking am stating what is a proven fact that’s all no thinking in need for this ticker to decide what is right or wrong!” “Where now all walking with a limp from nature fucking us right in the ass.” 2008-03-23T02:29:04Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/25534 <p>You need to check your grammar and spelling; there are a number of homonym errors and grammar.</p> <p>On the story side, it&#8217;s hard to tell exactly what is going on, or why the hail is happening apart from something about a chemical plant—nor is there any indication why it&#8217;s called &#8220;Hello Disease Control&#8221; since Disease Control never appears in it as far as I can tell.</p> <p>I&#8217;m not sure why this is at the top of the Most Active list for today, but I&#8217;m sure there must be a reason…</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25534?basename=50938 2008-03-23T02:29:04Z Robotech_Master http://ficlets.com/authors/robotech