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  <title>Comments on 'The Beach'</title>
  <subtitle>I have to make it to him before he gets on that bus! 

I ran up the street.My mind racing with the happenings of the past days with him. I turned to cornor and began to run down the boardwalk. _Almost there_ I thought. I saw the bus...it is pulling away! NO! But I was too late. By the time I got there it was gone. _Damn._

I turned to look down the beach.And there he is, laying on the sand, looking up at the sky. Ryan!He's still here!

I ran down the beach and dove down next to him.

&amp;quot;I'm sorry!,&amp;quot; I said, &amp;quot;I was wrong. I do love you! I do! I just wasn't sure of it! Well, I was, I just didn't want to believe it!&amp;quot;

Ryan looked at me.He closed his eyes for a second, then opening them he siad, &amp;quot;I just had to tell you. I didn't know what you'd say.&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Well, I do. And why are you still here?&amp;quot; I asked.

&amp;quot;I was hopeing you would come around.&amp;quot; He smiled embarrassedly.

I laugh. I bent down and kissed him, letting my hair fall down. Acting as a tent over us. We lay there, forehead to forehead, happy again.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-24T20:18:12Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Beach</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Aw. Such a sweet story!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-24T20:18:12Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ramy</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Beach</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;sweet romance.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-23T02:36:08Z</published>
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      <name>SKermitgorf</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Beach</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Not bad writing, and amazing observation that the footprints were left by a running person.  &lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-23T02:26:50Z</published>
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