Comments on 'For A Loved One'You let your mind be free and all at once everything was lucid,
You never cringed as everyone cried and begged you not to do this.
And now as you speak to me nothing makes sense and yet you seem happy,
I wish I could see when you come down, when all your elation is lacking.
Behind those sunglasses someone is lost but I'm not really sure that it's you,
I haven't been positive of your existence since that first time I saw you subdued. 2008-03-27T01:28:39Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/25719Comment on For A Loved One<p>Thanks guys, and you got the message right.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25719?basename=519342008-03-27T01:28:39ZMeAndTheMoonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/meandthemoonComment on For A Loved One<p>Yeah, THX , that’s the message I’m getting to. I love how subtle your rhyme and rhythm is. Very nice indeed.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25719?basename=511892008-03-24T15:42:22ZStorykeeper of Faehttp://ficlets.com/authors/smileComment on For A Loved One<p>Intriguing and like any good poem seems to suggest a couple of different options. I’m seeing a loved one or friend on drugs, but that just may be from my experiences.<br />Loa</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/25719?basename=511712008-03-24T14:56:15ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477