Derrick began slowly, _&quot;As I watched her face light up, it seemed impossible that she was real. She seemed to be that special one set to help me deal. I couldn’t understand her at the beginning. But then again, her beauty was completely unending._ _She’d just smiled at me. And it seemed as if I just began to see._ _She’d speak with a velvety edge. And she was fearless, jumping off a ledge._ _She’d laugh like an angel from above. And I knew that I had finally fallen in love.&quot;_ Macy sniffed as he finished the last line. &quot;Thats...thats amazing and beautiful and witty and so many other things. Who is it about?&quot; Derrick replied, &quot;Thanks, a couple of the lines are too long and everything doesn't really flow.&quot; He was obviously avoiding her question. &quot;Who is it about?&quot; Macy asked again, curiousity written across her face, though she knew who he was about to say. &quot;Well?&quot; Derrick sighed and glanced away from Macy, before silently whispering, &quot;Its uh about you.&quot; 2008-04-25T18:14:32Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/25780 <p>awww!! thats soooo sweet. Derrick kinda sounds like a mix of all my guyfriends, which makes the perfect guy!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=58609 2008-04-25T18:14:32Z Nissakit http://ficlets.com/authors/nerissa <p>awww that was the cutest poem ever and im like falling in love with derrick..lol</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=55849 2008-04-12T20:34:10Z howhardlifeis♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/dinasahm <p>Awwww, this is sooooo good!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=54952 2008-04-08T00:28:22Z flute faerie http://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061 <p>Aww! That&#8217;s so cute:)</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=53983 2008-04-02T23:37:21Z Apple http://ficlets.com/authors/camilla <p>ya wow, just wow!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=51338 2008-03-25T00:28:44Z Blusparrow http://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrow <p>wow</p> <p>Very good</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25780?basename=51334 2008-03-24T23:53:25Z ACORN http://ficlets.com/authors/acorn360