Comments on 'Never Hear The End'

Comments on 'Never Hear The End' "Hey!" I yelled. "Leave her alone!" The three guys picking on that girl turned around. They all looked to be a couple of years older than me, maybe grade 9 or grade 10. Yeah, they were bigger and stronger. And, yeah, they had me outnumbered. But I knew my friends well enough. If I didn't say something, I would never hear the end of it. "Mind your own business," one of them said. "I can _make_ it my business!" Yeah, that's it. Be tough! Show them who's boss! The three of them turned their backs on her and started walking toward me. I got myself ready for the fight of my life. When they were close enough, I threw a punch, as hard as I could, at at one, and he... ...just grabbed my arm, twisting it behind my back. The other two started punching me. All of a sudden, that girl was there, throwing punches and kicks better than any Hong Kong action flick! The three of them took one heck of a pounding before they ran. Saved by a _girl_. I knew my friends well enough. I'd never hear the end of this. 2008-03-26T18:16:51Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/25935 Comment on Never Hear The End <p>Nice. I love a good heroine even more than I love a good metaphor. And that is a lot.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25935?basename=51730 2008-03-26T18:16:51Z Storykeeper of Fae http://ficlets.com/authors/smile Comment on Never Hear The End <p> HAHAHA !! That was awesome! Go girl!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/25935?basename=51688 2008-03-26T14:18:21Z Blusparrow http://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrow