Comments on 'Cindy Lou Comes Clean'Cindy Lou started to push her way out, so I clenched and helped her. A few moments later, she was standing in the tub. I turned to face her. "So what was that about dying, huh?"
Cindy glared for a moment, then looked down. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have lied to you. I was just…afraid you wouldn't let me back in."
"When were you planning to tell me the truth?"
"I meant to tell you after the date," Cindy Lou said. "I just…didn't want to have to admit I'd lied."
I sighed. It was hard to stay angry with her. "Anything else you weren't quite accurate about, while we're here?
"Well…I actually don't have to come out once every thirty days." She hesitated. "I can come out as often as I want, or stay in as long as I want." She looked up at me, and the words came out in a rush. "Please let me back in? I won't be any trouble, I promise! I won't make you fart anymore, and I'll never come out at all unless you want me to. You won't even know I'm there."
I sighed, and turned to go. "Get showered. I'll think about it."2008-04-01T15:04:40Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/26015Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>The mafia, lol. That would b funnyz.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=535792008-04-01T15:04:40Zflute faeriehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>I think Cindy Lou must be hiding from someone. Mafia? That would be interesting.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=531802008-03-31T15:17:47ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>Hee…I agree with…everyone. But I really really like it. :]]<br />Please please sequel!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=523872008-03-29T00:30:00Zemma jo_234http://ficlets.com/authors/emmajComment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>I’m going to be brutally honest: I don’t know why I’m so hooked on this series! It’s….strange. But so appealing. I can’t wait to see what happens with him and Cindy Lou.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=523812008-03-29T00:06:36ZDragon_sun 515http://ficlets.com/authors/user_7233Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>in a bizarre way its really great <br />keep going!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=523332008-03-28T20:31:56ZUser 5239http://ficlets.com/authors/user_5239Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>this is sooooo weird!!!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=522692008-03-28T15:54:30ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>She’s hiding something…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=521862008-03-28T05:00:48ZJ.B. Williamshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_5182Comment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>This is straaannnnnggggeeee!<br />But yet, I find myself enjoying it…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=520762008-03-27T21:28:15ZLone Writerhttp://ficlets.com/authors/solopenComment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>Great job!!! I like folowing this story!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=520712008-03-27T20:55:57ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>i agree, this is ttly interesting=]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=520692008-03-27T20:27:03ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on Cindy Lou Comes Clean<p>=X This is a really interesting series! Great work. Throat Wolf = For The Win. =)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26015?basename=520512008-03-27T17:35:04ZAmo de Tuus Aetas et Morshttp://ficlets.com/authors/clotifoth