Comments on 'Already There'The scratched oak of her closet doors rattled and shook as Madison struggled to keep them shut. And yet they still flew open with a bone-chilling shriek - but nothing was in them.
She cursed at herself and stood up. He was just toying with her now.
_Oh, really, Madison?_
She jumped, and beat her hands against the wall.
The voice rumbled deeper than a thousand levels of hell; she assumed it was chuckling. _Odd how applicant your metaphor is,_ it boomed.
"Shut uuuup!" she screamed, and plugged her ears with her fists.
_One problem with that,_ he said - inside her head. _Oh, and, by the way: the praying thing was cute. Funny how it didn't work though._
Outside, the storm clouds gathered themselves into a rough shape. Two spheres of lightning raged in the center.
With pain and fury, Madison hurled the crucifix on her wall into the cloud.
The voice shrieked. _Naughty, naughty, Madison. You play dirty…or so I would define it, I assume…_
"Go to hell!" she screamed.
_Already there, sweet-pea._2008-04-02T00:12:03Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/26561Comment on Already There<p>By the way, by no means am I saying that the “religious aspects” didn’t help – they just haven’t seemed to yet. But also by no means are we going to make this easy for the girl. We’ll see how it turns out in the sequels…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26561?basename=537382008-04-02T00:12:03ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohoboComment on Already There<p>Genius. Pure genius. I’ll figure something out to follow this up with, I think..</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26561?basename=537352008-04-01T23:50:22ZMask By The Moonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mbtmComment on Already There<p>Oh, that was scary. Interesting touch having the religious aspects ineffective or perhaps semi-effective. Certainly begs the question what will be effective?<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26561?basename=537332008-04-01T23:35:34ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Already There<p>mm devilish.. spooky… the voice she hears is ominus.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26561?basename=537192008-04-01T22:57:59ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf