Comments on 'Community College' "I cannot express to you how much I really, really, _really_ don't want to be here" Shannon said as she sat down in the chair next to Adam. He smiled to himself as he looked her up and down, taking her in.
Her books had papers stuffed in them and falling out of them. Her hair was messy, clearly unbrushed, possibly unwashed. But she smelled delicious, like an alluring flower. Her t shirt was wrinkled and loose, but it came just short enough to let him see her hip bones peeking out from her low rise jeans, putting pressure on her lean, tan flesh.
"Couldn't he have given us one _freaking_ day off? Would it really have killed us? He is always talking about how we are ahead of his night class, why can't we have a day off and then it would even out?" She looked into his eyes now. He looked back at hers for a moment, then he glanced down at her mouth, where her braces caught the light and gleamed at him.
If only he could figure out how old she was. 2008-04-02T01:44:47Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/26591Comment on Community College<p>Great descriptions, just like a rather lusty guy might observe. And I love that teaser ending about her age being unknown. Should he feel guilty or should he pluck up some courage? And I really like that you didn’t make her perfect, what with the messy hair and all.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26591?basename=537742008-04-02T01:44:47ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Community College<p>Good observational descriptions that draw the reader in.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/26591?basename=537642008-04-02T01:26:59Zgemminxhttp://ficlets.com/authors/gemminx