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  <title>Comments on 'Cheering Up the New Girl'</title>
  <subtitle>She looked blankly at me for a moment. Then her eyes took in the surroundings, and she slowly sank onto the bed. &amp;quot;He&#8212;he really did it, didn't he? He said he was going to put me inside the gem, and sell me, and&#8230;what did he _do_ to me?&amp;quot; She looked at the fur on her arms. 

I opened my mouth, but no words came out. This was _not_ how it had been supposed to go. As she started to cry, I couldn't resist. I moved in closer, next to her, and put my arm around her shoulder. 

She sniffled and looked up. &amp;quot;I&#8230;belong to you, don't I? Something inside me tells me I have to obey you.&amp;quot; She looked down at herself. &amp;quot;What do you want me to do?&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Um&#8230;well&#8230;&amp;quot; I stammered. &amp;quot;Try to be a little happier?&amp;quot;

And as if someone had thrown a switch, suddenly she was. Her slump was gone, and she was sitting bolt upright. &amp;quot;Oh!&amp;quot; Her eyes widened, and she slowly smiled at me. &amp;quot;Hello&#8230;master? I'm sorry, I'm new to this whole ownership thing. Is there something I can&#8230;do for you?&amp;quot; Her fur tickled as she rubbed against me.

This was more like it.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-02T19:48:31Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cheering Up the New Girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ooh &amp;#8211; I have not read the prequel yet but this looks interesting&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/26607?basename=53890</id>
    <published>2008-04-02T19:48:31Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ridcully Calvert</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cheering Up the New Girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;You&amp;#8217;re a stinker, you know that, right?  Sequel me!  Sequel me!  And the first comment is, &amp;#8220;&lt;em&gt;Not what I had in mind&lt;/em&gt;&amp;#8221;?  You cheeky monkey, you.  Hope the sequel reconciles my previous failed attempt and your subsequent addition.  :-P&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/26607?basename=53865</id>
    <published>2008-04-02T18:27:05Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cheering Up the New Girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;very miss leading at frist, until the end great job&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/26607?basename=53791</id>
    <published>2008-04-02T02:23:20Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>butterflygirl6106</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cheering Up the New Girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Thanks! Feel free to continue it, or go back and write a parallel sequel to one of the earlier bits. There&amp;#8217;s lots of room for this story to go all different directions. ;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-02T02:11:17Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Robotech_Master</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cheering Up the New Girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I laughed out loud at the last line!  Great finish.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/26607?basename=53779</id>
    <published>2008-04-02T02:04:07Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>nrpaz</name>
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