The rain is falling- upside down falling up, from the muddy grass, the dark pavement under my feet like a reflection gone awry Its falling up, but how is that possible, to fall upwards to fall downwards- tossed like a swirling current in a cruel and dimly lit stage What is it to look at the moon to stare at a face- so bright, so happily far off in a milky distance As the rain keeps falling- up your body into your skin all in the wrong direction. 2008-04-06T16:47:32Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/26868 <p>hmm, happiness is far away, things are going the wrong direction&#8230; reflection gone awry, sounds like a metaphor for feeling lost in your person. Who are you? An image crisis. <br />Maybe like art, I interpreted your poem my way. I see your creation as this expression of losing your Self.<br />I appreciate this craft, this art of words you have made!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/26868?basename=54653 2008-04-06T16:47:32Z Mistress Elsha Hawk http://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawk <p>Bizarre, sort of like a poem of a Salvador Dali painting. Nice to see you back!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/26868?basename=54629 2008-04-06T11:15:05Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477