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  <title>Comments on 'The Trip to Live Life to it's Fullest'</title>
  <subtitle>I walked to the end of my street.

I sat down on the bus stop and set my bag down next to me. A man sat down next to me. I ignored him, he ignored me. He had spikey black hair and was wearing sunglasses. His headphones were playing some rock song.

The bus screeched to a halt at my feet. I took a deep breath. I reached into my pocket and pulled out the carefully folded 2 dollar fair and paid the bus driver. I took a window seat in the middle of the bus and put my bag on the next seat so no one would sit near me. I rode until we got to the Greyhound Bus Station. I stood in awe that I had gotten this far without going home. I walked towards the doors. I slowed. I saw a father and daughter traveling together, just like my father and I had. I let a single tear slide down my porcelian skin. I didn't let that stop me though. I inhaled deeply and step through the doorway. _This is the beginning of the adventure of my life. Goodbye, school. Goodbye, family. Goodbye, friends. I'm off to live my life._</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-08T21:22:33Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Trip to Live Life to it's Fullest</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;It is a quiet internal monologue. Kind of sad, still very calm, just where is this person going?&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-08T21:22:33Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Trip to Live Life to it's Fullest</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Nice, quiet, internal view of the last few steps onto the adventure.  Nicely paced as well, with little bits of information and detail.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-08T01:09:19Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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