She made her way down the hallway, smiling at all who passed by. She smiled during English. She smiled during P.E. She smiled all day long. And, that night, she cried. 2008-04-15T08:08:42Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/27101 <p>ah, great job. too many people are like that arent they?</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27101?basename=56540 2008-04-15T08:08:42Z wytherwings http://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwings <p>Poetry is not really my bag (funny how there are never enough aliens in it :-D )</p> <p>But I felt the emotion in this one. Well done!</p> <p>LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27101?basename=55280 2008-04-09T19:04:20Z Ridcully Calvert http://ficlets.com/authors/user_joon <p>I like how you didn&#8217;t say the &#8220;defensive&#8221; part out right; you gave the readers some time to figure it out themselves. And nice repetition.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27101?basename=55255 2008-04-09T16:20:34Z Stovohobo http://ficlets.com/authors/stovohobo <p>Short but not so sweet, poor thing. Nice job at a succinct entry that still fits the bill of the challenge, and quite well at that.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27101?basename=55099 2008-04-08T21:04:25Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477