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  <title>Comments on 'What I See.'</title>
  <subtitle>Green. Blue. Brown. Hazel. Amber. Grey.

Cold. Warm. Laughing. Sparkling.

I've seen many eyes. I almost have to, where I work. Selling food 24/7, at a cash register in a store. I watch them go by, and don't think anything more. Usually.

Her eyes were odd. They were intense. Green, with a hint of fire. She laughed. She made small talk.

She came back a week later.

It was gone. Her fire was out. She had the circles under her eyes that meant she hadn't slept in a week. But worst of all, her eyes weren't laughing anymore. They had a sign in the window, but I knew what they were doing in the back.

They were crying. She was so sad. I wanted to reach out right there and hold her, tell her to cry, that it was okay.

I wonder what her story was. I got the title from her eyes. I saw a book in that face, waiting to be written.

I wonder who will write it.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-11T10:23:29Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on What I See.</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was lovely, a whole story&amp;#8230;no, two stories in an eye.  Great job with the imagery and metaphors without overdoing and keeping to the themes of both the eye and the retail experience.  Great ficlet!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-11T10:23:29Z</published>
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      <name>THX 0477</name>
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