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  <subtitle>Me: Mike!!! Help me!!

Kahn stood there looked out then looked at me. I called again.

Me: Mike!! I need you!!! Help me!!

Kahn kicked me hard and ran. He just ran so fast he was gone in the woods in the matter of seconds. I cried the hardest I have cried in forever. _I can&#8217;t believe him almost&#8230; I knew I should have never trusted him. Now I am alone to fend for myself._ It was a long time till I heard some foot steps and it was mike who found me in the fetal position sobbing. 

Mike: Oh my god, what happened!?
Me: Kahn... He tried to....

I didn't even need to finish and he knew. He bent down and picked me up, cradling me.

Mike: Demi, I should have come earlier but I had no idea this was it. I thought you just wanted me to come back. I am so sorry.
Me: I am just so glad you are here for me now.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-14T22:28:23Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on He Came</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;yea, totally agree. my turn!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-14T22:28:23Z</published>
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      <name>Freedom</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on He Came</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;yay!! hes gone!!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-14T22:28:05Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Nissakit</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on He Came</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;awww well at least Kahn&amp;#8217;s gone now..and Mike&amp;#8217;s here.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-14T21:37:53Z</published>
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      <name>howhardlifeis&#9829;</name>
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