&quot;A WHAT!&quot; I nearly screeched. &quot;Now you see why it was so important that I talk to you. If this vampire finds out that I hang with you, it could get me killed. Our you!&quot; Angie's voice was sad, her head was bowed in thought. &quot;Wait I think I may have an idea here.&quot; I said pacing back and forth. &quot;You always said that I didn't smell like my kind, you said it was the thing that kept you alive, I mean your parents hating werewolves and all.&quot; My pacing slowed as I began to think this through. “But hey, I’ve been over to your house a lot and your parents don’t know, maybe he won’t either.” My expression was hopeful, Angie’s was doubtful. “It’s a good thought but what if his senses are sharper than my parents?” I stopped to look at her carefully, her question hung in the air for a minute. “Well then I can take care of myself!” I finaly said determinedly, sitting back down on the edge of the bed. 2008-04-18T13:12:10Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/27661 <p>thanx Ally, hey r u done w/ eclipse yet???<br />Whinney</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27661?basename=57274 2008-04-18T13:12:10Z Whinney http://ficlets.com/authors/eldarwin <p>I like it write more.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27661?basename=57266 2008-04-18T11:18:19Z Miranda Ann http://ficlets.com/authors/miranda <p>I think it&#8217;s great and it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting to read more&#8230; I can&#8217;t wait to see where this one goes! Good job!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27661?basename=57047 2008-04-17T16:11:20Z Twitch http://ficlets.com/authors/twitchchik9 <p>Yeah I had to write this one really fast cuz i had to leave so i really need to slow down!<br />hey thanks for your comment though<br />Whinney</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27661?basename=56815 2008-04-16T08:00:39Z Whinney http://ficlets.com/authors/eldarwin <p>I&#8217;m drawn to vampire/werewolf stories, but this didn&#8217;t quite do it for me.<br />While it&#8217;s an interesting concept, I found the dialogue a bit hard to follow (&#8220;enter&#8221; everytime someone else starts speaking), and felt it could have had a bit more depth. <br />I do plan on following this series, because I want to know what happens.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/27661?basename=56682 2008-04-15T21:03:33Z Laine the Grey http://ficlets.com/authors/lainegrey