Now wait just a damn minute! True love? You're not in it! After what you did the other day, you'd just better stay away. I saw you hittin' up that other girl, right after you told me I was your world. Well, you can have that stanky ho! She's been around, I'll have you know. So don't you wait for me to call. You want me back? You'll have to crawl! I've had it with your nice-guy schemes. You want me back? In your dreams! I should have seen it from the start. You're a cruel man with a twisted heart. So don't tell me that I broke your heart. And don't call that sickly poem art. PS: Txt me later! 2008-04-15T21:57:42Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/2784 <p>Late comment I know, but I just seen it now.<br />It was great, love it!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/2784?basename=56708 2008-04-15T21:57:42Z I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!! http://ficlets.com/authors/manic_panic <p>That was excellent &#8211; the rhymes weren&#8217;t predictable and the last line was classic.<br />And, you get a star just for using <em>nice-guy schemes.</em></p> http://ficlets.com/stories/2784?basename=9224 2007-08-29T21:47:21Z Alexa ♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018 <p>I liked it and i dont think that it was or puposely making fun of awkward turtles poem. i did like it and i thought it was good</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/2784?basename=3730 2007-06-29T02:37:48Z User 2864 http://ficlets.com/authors/user_2864 <p>thanks for making fun of my writing</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/2784?basename=2181 2007-05-24T22:14:27Z Awkward Turtle http://ficlets.com/authors/oddball_14728