Comments on 'Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?'One day, I looked in a mirror
And whatever did I see?
All of my failures, all my faults
Looking straight back at me.
Lust laid a laughing leer
While Envy urged me on.
Happiness just wouldn't show;
Greed grew gargantuan.
Pride prodded me to the point
Where I thought I couldn't proceed,
And Avarice all but won me out,
While making friends with Greed.
Gluttony glurged and gave me up,
Sloth would succeed for sure.
Agony was my only friend,
Sin my only spur.
And all this contained in just this one
Tiny, little silver mirror.
Would Hope come through, just one more time,
Would anything shine clearer?2008-04-25T00:35:14Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/27865Comment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>I love this. For some reason, I pictured each one roiling to the surface in facial expression, then the next one taking over, like a battle of faces. Great idea.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=584952008-04-25T00:35:14ZValley Fey/Pinprickhttp://ficlets.com/authors/imandynan0Comment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>I love this. For some reason, I pictured each one roiling to the surface in facial expression, then the next one taking over, like a battle of faces. Great idea.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=584942008-04-25T00:35:13ZValley Fey/Pinprickhttp://ficlets.com/authors/imandynan0Comment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>This is amazing! I love it, and just like everyone else, I love how you used the 7 deadly sins =]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=575552008-04-20T15:03:38ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>the seven deadly sins!<br />i just watched them on America’s Next Top Model today.<br />=]<br />~<br />nice job, anyway.<br />stovo’s a poet!!<br />XD</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=574952008-04-20T02:40:35ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>Love it! Not like anyone else’s, and great idea using the Seven Deadly Sins.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=573542008-04-18T21:47:14ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawkComment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>Beautiful rhythm to this poem. Great work.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=573072008-04-18T15:59:52ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>Ah, the seven deadly sins…my favorites. Wrote a triptych of short stories all around the seven deadly sins and the seven cardinal virtues. It’s nice how they cover all the major sins. Nice conflict in this poem between acknowledging faults but trying to move past them.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=571712008-04-17T23:07:45ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>=twitch. sniffle.=</p>
<p>you’re mean, ya know that? I started crying.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=571562008-04-17T21:40:11ZMask By The Moonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mbtmComment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>Nice take on the 7 deadly sins… Dorian Grey Like.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=571552008-04-17T21:39:52ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All?<p>This is beautiful, Stovo. !!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/27865?basename=571532008-04-17T21:32:55ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love