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  <title>Comments on 'Within The Universe (A Poem)'</title>
  <subtitle>The transparent surface reflects

Flesh eclipsing

My skeleton&#8217;s silence,

While all around me

The universe 

Vastly veils an

Absent echo&#8217;s stare

That shatters stillness

And invites awakening.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-18T20:37:40Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Within The Universe (A Poem)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Don&amp;#8217;t know if I&amp;#8217;ve seen poetry from you before.  Kind of gives me a big, wondering feeling, the poem I mean.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-18T20:37:40Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Within The Universe (A Poem)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;nice poem! It is great to read your stories again!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-18T20:12:06Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Blusparrow</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Within The Universe (A Poem)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I adore poetry like nobody&amp;#8217;s business (and we, after all, in the midst of poetry month!). This is a great poem. Very good alliteration. &lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-18T15:19:58Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ana Cristina</name>
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