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  <title>Comments on 'Cry (A True Story)'</title>
  <subtitle>An hour later, they let us back into the school. 

The seventh grade was instructed to go to their sixth hour classes. On my way, I passed the Unified Arts wing. It was roped off, and I glimpsed policemen, standing and talking with the principal. 

In Language Arts, sixth period, my teacher let us talk and play games. Everyone was discussing the situation animatedly - everyone had an opinion that they wanted to share.

Me, I just sat there.

We switched classes at the regular time, and I crossed the hall for Math. 

My teacher talked to us about the incident, explaining some things and asking about others. I continued to sit in silence.

Tears welled in my eyes.

_Don't cry._

_Please don't._

People asked me if I was okay, and I said nothing.

Finally my teacher came and sat down next to me, asking if I wanted to talk, if everything was alright.

When I stayed silent, she took me out in the hall to get a drink, even though the teachers weren't supposed to give hall passes.

And only then did I cry.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-04-19T18:46:38Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cry (A True Story)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very good point, pinprick. I wrote a sequel and hope it clears things up a little.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-19T18:46:38Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>emma jo_234</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Cry (A True Story)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;The story is penned well, with great imagery, but I still don&amp;#8217;t understand why you&amp;#8217;re crying. What exactly is going through your head?&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-04-19T18:37:38Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Valley Fey/Pinprick</name>
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