I look at a very confused Rosaline and step past _all_ the people, her following behind, only because there's not room for a two-person horizontal line. Well, we've been training for this for a while now. We should be ready. But every conscious cell in my body *screamed* with nervousness. And my neck was sore from nodding so much. It's not easy beaing the lowest rank. But we continued nodding to higher ranks, all the way to the man who had yelled at us from across the room. Keeping perfect posture, Rosaline stepped beside me. &quot;Yessir?&quot; we inquired simultaneously. 2008-04-28T01:16:30Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/28100 <p>oooo im gonna go read the sequel!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/28100?basename=59227 2008-04-28T01:16:30Z Flute Loop<33 http://ficlets.com/authors/sasha <p>Nicely done &#8211; liked the point of view of the main character &#38; how you captured the emotion of the moment.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/28100?basename=57565 2008-04-20T16:06:03Z YodaOnCrack http://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrack <p>must be tough being the lowest rank, sore from head nodding and all the yes sirs and taking orders..</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/28100?basename=57557 2008-04-20T15:35:38Z SKermitgorf http://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf <p>ooh, I like it. =)<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/28100?basename=57556 2008-04-20T15:28:52Z .:band baby:. http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbaby