Comments on 'Warning: Baggage Included'The next day, I was rushing out the door to get to class when I nearly trampled Jodi. She was standing in the hallway, bent over backwards struggling to carry a mini fridge. Beside her was some godawful pink rolling suitcase, zippered halfway with clothes and stuffed animals bulging out.
"Oh Jordan!" she smiled. "Be a dear and hold the door for me?"
I balked. "Um. Jodi? _What_ are you doing?"
"Didn't Tom tell you?" She pushed past me and set the fridge down in the living room. My living room. "I'm moving in!"
I glanced at my watch. Crap. "No, Jodi."
"No?"
"Just… no." I was still backing toward the door. "Look, I don't have time to talk about this. I can't afford another tardy. But when I get back, I'd better not see any of your crap around here. I mean it!"
She opened the bag and started removing prissy girly things I couldn't even identify. I crossed my arms. "I'm serious, Jodi."
She looked up. "Jordan?"
"What?"
"Your eye looks better." And she wrapped her arms around me and kissed me on the cheek.2008-04-25T17:59:02Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28535Comment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>I have sequeled Ana Cristina’s sequel to your sequel. Now, that I got all that out. Your turn!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585972008-04-25T17:59:02Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>You’ve got sequel! :-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585902008-04-25T17:32:14ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>Nice job on both characters and setting up an impossible battle for the poor guy that he doesn’t even have the time to fight right now.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585852008-04-25T17:13:29ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>Another classic event! The idea of her moving in to the guy’s dorm room is just classic. I love her overbearing way of unloading her stuff even after he tells her not to. If you have inspiration go for it Ana C. I’ll go after you. Brilliance = <em>prissy girl things I couldn’t even identity</em>.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585772008-04-25T15:59:00Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>Let me know if you want to take it, TBS . I think I’m up … ?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585752008-04-25T15:20:21ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>OK, I’m all over this. I’m just waiting till 1:00 when I have a planning period and don’t teach.<br />That Jodi is <em>evil</em>, man!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585732008-04-25T15:18:06ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Warning: Baggage Included<p>So I guess it’s tbs’ turn next, and then Ana Cristina? Just trying to get the sequence straight. :-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28535?basename=585712008-04-25T15:13:00Zuselessnesshttp://ficlets.com/authors/uselessness