Comments on 'The Game Within a Game'There I was, sprawled on the bathroom floor, one arm draped clumsily over the side of the bathtub for support, watching stars and little birdies circle my head. Mendez standing over me with a frown.
My jaw popped like a cap gun when I tried to speak. "What the hell was that for?"
"Do you have a life-size picture of Jodi?" he demanded.
"No, stupid."
"Does Tom?"
"No."
"Who does?"
"You do…"
"And don't you forget it."
"Jeez, Mendez, you're such a tool."
"Just 'cause you have a spiffy new four-pack doesn't mean you're not still a total nancy-boy. Don't mess with my girl."
"_Your_ girl? Hello! Have you _seen_ her with Tom?"
"You think she doesn't know about your little ruse? You think she's completely oblivious to the game you and your roommate are playing? I got news for you, nancy-boy, Jodi knows everything. Fact is, she's got a game of her own."
"You mean, she's playing Tom?"
"The girl's a frigging genius."
"Hey guys, what are you doing in here?" Tom was at the bathroom door. "Is that _lipstick?_"2008-04-25T20:02:12Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28548Comment on The Game Within a Game<p>Ok, I’ve finally caught up on this series. First of all, excellent work all around. Secondly, I think <em>I’m</em> kind of in love with Jodi. She’s trouble, and I love trouble.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28548?basename=586782008-04-25T20:02:12ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on The Game Within a Game<p>Can’t stop laughing… <em>Do you have a life-size picture of Jodi?</em> and everything that follows is uproariously funny. And, I <em>love</em> the added tension you brought in about Jodi knowing about the ruse and having a plan of her own.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28548?basename=586742008-04-25T19:54:52Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on The Game Within a Game<p>Ha, I’m loving the four-pack! OK, I’m all over this like white on rice. :D<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28548?basename=586382008-04-25T19:02:54ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on The Game Within a Game<p>Ooh, more details and more potential disaster for everyone and anyone. Bold plot choices and solid dialog. Heck of a trio of writers you all having going on here…talk about a super group for a series!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28548?basename=586342008-04-25T18:48:30ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477