Comments on 'Naked Male Insecurity'Suddenly, Mendez and Tom were throwing punches at _me_. Jodi had thrust me right into the thick of it. She stood to the side, leering at us.
"I just love naked male insecurity!" She gushed. I went to berate her but then had to quickly duck to avoid Tom's rapidly approaching fist.
"What the hell? Guys, just stop for a second - Ow! Damnit, Tom! What did you do that for?"
"This is all your stupid fault, Jordan! It was YOUR plan in the first place!"
"Just listen to me for a minute! And Mendez, would you quit trying to give me a wedgie?!"
"You're such a nancy-boy. Stand up for yourself! Be a man!"
"You can do it, Tom!" Jodi squealed, jumping up and down like a demonic cheerleader.
I was momentarily distracted by the sight of Jodi in all her bouncing glory so I wasn't able to deflect Mendez's left hook. But I took it standing up (for once). Mendez looked at me in astonishment.
"Hit him back, Jordan!"
So I did. I hit Mendez back. It looked like all those painful hours at Rock Hard were finally paying off.2008-05-02T18:39:40Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28581Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>The title snagged me on this one! I laughed out loud. I loved the line “demonic cheerleader”. Great job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=600352008-05-02T18:39:40ZNightMaidenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_7538Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>This is a very funny story you all are penning, nice installment here Ana. I’m going back to read from the start.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=593422008-04-28T19:56:45ZTad Winslowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/tjdComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p><em>And Mendez would you quit trying to give me a wedgie</em> I love that line. Not quit giving me a wedgie, but quit trying to give me a wedgie. Even funnier.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=588242008-04-26T03:33:20Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>On the edge of my seat, guys. Great stuff.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=588012008-04-26T02:23:37ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Okay, now that I’m not in an incredible hurry. My actual comments about it. Perfect title, that line is brilliant and I also cracked up at the wedgie. I love that what I thought was going to be a detour (the gym element) ended up being one of the keys to the series. And yes, I love that our boy is no longer a nancy-boy. He can really take it and deliver it now!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587842008-04-26T02:03:51Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Your turn again! Looks like you might have the last chapter!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587792008-04-26T01:48:25Zuselessnesshttp://ficlets.com/authors/uselessnessComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Jeez, I’m such a doofus. I wrote Tom but I meant Jordan, of course. Thanks! Going to read sequel now. :-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587522008-04-25T23:41:22ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Okay, sequel has arrived!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587512008-04-25T23:38:57Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>I think I was confused because the line says hit him back Tom. Should it say hit him back Jordan? Also sequel is moments away.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587502008-04-25T23:31:34Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>OK, I clarified the end a bit. I think I hear Lurch’s unmistakable voice getting closer…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587492008-04-25T23:25:57ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Wedgie? I laughed out loud. :-P<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587482008-04-25T23:24:14Zuselessnesshttp://ficlets.com/authors/uselessnessComment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>Not the end! Keep it going! Let me see if I can clear things up. Jordan beat up Mendez.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587472008-04-25T23:24:09ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Naked Male Insecurity<p>I like it, very exciting and ‘fitting’ end to this ficlet. Only thing is I a bit confused about who beat who up. Did Jordan beat Tom up or Mendez?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28581?basename=587452008-04-25T23:22:26Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace