Comments on 'A Bit Of A Shock'In fact, I wiped the floor with both of them. I was the last man standing. They were so broken and bruised that Jodi was beside herself. "Look at you," she said, a demonic, enticing smile on her face. She grabbed my biceps, and brushed her hands over my body. "Sexy boy."
I almost couldn't resist her toxic and entirely captivating aura. The key word. Almost. "Jodi, I want to thank you for something."
"And what's that my wittle Jordie-Wordie?" Jodi said.
"I want to thank you for helping me realize that I'm exactly who I want to be. And I want to thank you for helping me learn to respect myself."
"What else is there for a charming young girl to do?" Jodi flirted, grabbing my hand. And we walked back to my room. "The game is over, Jordan. I _choose_ you. You are my champion."
"Then, this is gonna come as a bit of a shock," I said, venomously. "I said earlier that I wanted to thank you for helping me learn to respect myself. Well, that's the thing. I respect myself enough to crush your sorry ass right here."2008-05-02T23:21:40Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28585Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p> YAY JORDAN !!<br /><em>Key word. Almost.</em> love it!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=601282008-05-02T23:21:40ZApplehttp://ficlets.com/authors/camillaComment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>Yeah, Jordan! Wake up and smell the roses! Throw Jodi <em>out</em> the window!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=600482008-05-02T19:09:12ZNightMaidenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_7538Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p> OOOOOH ..</p>
<p>That toast was BURNEDDD .<br />:]]</p>
<p>You Know You Love Mee!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=595052008-04-29T21:53:24ZYou Know You Love Mee!http://ficlets.com/authors/user_7963Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>I wrote another sequel to uselessness’s last part. Sad that this is ending!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=588082008-04-26T02:46:41ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>Yes! Hooray for him, resisting that primal urge. I love a hero.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=588022008-04-26T02:25:21ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>Wow, a new and … vindictive Jordan? Or is that Jordie Wordie? LOL . Great work, as usual from you.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=587872008-04-26T02:11:39ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>Sequeled! The story’s pretty much wound up at this point, with just a couple loose ends that deserve a nice finish. :-) What a fun series this has been! Glad I could be a part of it.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=587762008-04-26T01:39:00Zuselessnesshttp://ficlets.com/authors/uselessnessComment on A Bit Of A Shock<p>Okay. I just read this series all the way through and I love it to pieces. This plot is hilARious!!! This characters are great. I love how you kept the reader guessing. Fabulous! Sequel! <br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28585?basename=587652008-04-26T00:21:16Zemma jo_234http://ficlets.com/authors/emmaj