Comments on 'Currents [Twilight Challenge]'_When he touched me, it stung my hand as if an electric current had passed through us._ I pulled back instinctively and then felt guilty when I saw him wince and pull back his own hand. He'd been handing me back last week's notes, which he'd borrowed since he'd missed that class. I could still feel the electricity coursing through my veins, stimulating my senses.
He didn't know the effect he had over me. But how could I tell him? I certainly couldn't tell him right now, in the middle of Professor Seitzer's lecture on _1984_.
But when? How? "Hey, what are you doing this weekend? Wanna get together? Oh, by the way, I'm madly in love with you and I have a feeling that you might like me, too. See you later!"
I almost giggled out loud at the thought of telling him in such an offhand way and I had to look down to hide my mirth. But _he_ saw me, and now the ghost of a smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. I could hide nothing from him.
I would tell him soon, I promised myself. I owed it to myself and to him.2008-05-07T00:08:49Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28738Comment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>Nice little description of nervousness and apprehension that comes with this sort of thing. And I would appreciate it <em>so</em> much more if the girls said it like that. But no, they have to go off and have their <em>friends</em> ask instead, and it gets so much more awkward.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=607102008-05-07T00:08:49ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohoboComment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>awe, that was cute! Nice job!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=604112008-05-05T02:39:44Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>aw thats sweet<br />yup, i know that feeling. kinda.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=597342008-05-01T05:46:28Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>really sweet…beautiful =]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=595252008-04-29T23:57:02Zsomeday_93http://ficlets.com/authors/someday_93Comment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>Aww, how sweeeet!! Great use of the quote!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=595202008-04-29T23:30:03Zflute faeriehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061Comment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>That was sweet. All too familiar, liking but afraid to say and made awkward by the secret.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=591862008-04-28T00:20:00ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>Gotta love that feeling. I like the consideration of letting out her intentions in such a matter of fact way. This does have quite the sequel potential.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=591832008-04-28T00:13:43Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>Thanks. I probably won’t sequel, although anyone else who wants to is certainly welcome to!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=591792008-04-27T23:52:05ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Currents [Twilight Challenge]<p>OOooo! Any continuing pieces??? I would love to see a sequel! Great way of using the quote!!!<br />(I’m not going to rate the entries btw)<br />=)<br />luvz,<br />S♥E</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28738?basename=591782008-04-27T23:47:09ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love