Comments on 'Watch The TIde Drift Downward'All I can do is sit here and watch the tide drift downward. It's magnificent blue takes my breath away. I love how this place looks after a storm. It has a certain sparkle to it.
I just want to dive. Be part of it's perfection. But the sign is my only barrier keeping me from it's majesty. All I can do is sit here and watch the tide drift downward.2008-04-29T11:18:16Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28901Comment on Watch The TIde Drift Downward<p>Don’t know whether you’re familiar with Biblical writing styles, but you’ve very nearly got a “chiastic structure”:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chiastic_structure going on here. Very nice little story, gets a lot done with very few words.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28901?basename=594532008-04-29T11:18:16ZMycrofthttp://ficlets.com/authors/zsigeComment on Watch The TIde Drift Downward<p>i love it, despite its shortness<br />mostly because of the first and last line, how its the same.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28901?basename=594482008-04-29T06:48:52Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwings