Comments on 'Unexpected Arrival'"Miss Beatrice Hughley," the servant announced in a sonorous tone. I looked up, as did many guests, curious to see who the late-comer was.
A young woman stood uncertainly on the threshold. She was so pale she was almost translucent, and her hair, a red so vivid it shone through the powder, was wound in intricate plaits upon her head. Amber eyes fringed with impossibly long lashes peered out into the room, searching the tables. As her eyes fell upon our table, a tremulous smile lit up her face and she began walking towards us, the voluminous skirts of her pale pink gown whispering as she moved.
Next to me, Lord Windham stood, a ready smile upon his lips. "Dearest Betty," he said, holding out his hands. Miss Hughley took his hands and smiled up at him.
"Geoffrey, I haven't seen you in _ages_. How is your sister?"
The other guests turned their attention back to their plates, bored again, and I attempted to do the same. When I turned back to face the table, I noticed that de Grave was no longer there.2008-04-30T15:01:28Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/28954Comment on Unexpected Arrival<p>That was great fun, and quite a striking description of the mystery woman. And nicely handled amount of stuff going on, her entrance, the crowd’s reaction, our protagonist, and de Grave’s departure.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28954?basename=595942008-04-30T15:01:28ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Unexpected Arrival<p>I love the I guess I’ll say <em>cowardly</em> vanishing act of de Grave.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/28954?basename=595772008-04-30T03:16:48Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace