I was too stunned to feel the pain. I couldn't breathe yet. What had led to this defining moment? How had life and death nearly collided to the point where it was almost insufferable? I asked myself these questions as I watched him. He looked more hurt than I did; and I was the one with a gash running across my back. _I'm sorry._ His eyes whispered each time he worked up enough courage to look at me. Secretly, I forgave him. Secretly, I understood all of this. Secretly, I wanted to hate him. But I couldn't. For all of his strength, he looked so helpless. So weak. So...childlike. Then, the pain came. The white pain. It took everything in me to keep from crying out, because I knew that would only hurt him more. 2008-05-01T23:35:29Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/29054 <p>O.O! WOW !!!! I lovce this!!!! And I am being biased but WOW !!! ( I love Twilight too much lol)<br />This is great!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29054?basename=59904 2008-05-01T23:35:29Z Sailor Emo http://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love <p>i agree with jenunique, i like where you went with this. it&#8217;s so&#8230; real<br />great job depicting what they were feeling<br />awesome</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29054?basename=59738 2008-05-01T05:53:27Z wytherwings http://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwings <p>That would be a great spin off! I like where you went with this.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29054?basename=59732 2008-05-01T04:57:22Z Jenunique http://ficlets.com/authors/jenunique <p>oooh.<br />this reminds me sooooo much of something that steaphnie myers would actually write&#8230; soo GREAT job here.<br />:]]</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29054?basename=59720 2008-05-01T02:23:41Z You Know You Love Mee! http://ficlets.com/authors/user_7963 <p>I know it technically didn&#8217;t have to be <em>Twilight</em> based, but it&#8217;s a piece of what I felt that Emily was feeling after Sam ripped up her back&#8230;. Or, it could be non-Twilight people. Either way.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29054?basename=59711 2008-05-01T02:05:00Z Laine P. Grey http://ficlets.com/authors/lainegrey